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写作规范练(二)
写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)
假如你是李华,美国一所中学的代表团来你校访问。你代表学校介绍将要在你校举行的有关“建设美丽中国”的活动,主要内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.介绍活动内容;
3.邀请他们参加。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
My sister Priscilla and I just came back from a week­long vacation in Portugal with lots of photos. I'll remember so many wonderful things about my trip to the cities of Lisbon and Porto, but one experience in particular sticks out, something that happened on our last night in Lisbon.
Before the trip, I put together a very detailed route of places to see. One of the must­visit places on my list was Livraria do Simão, the smallest bookstore in Lisbon. On our very first day in Lisbon, Priscilla and I searched for it. We found the oldest bookstore in the world. But the smallest one was impossible to find! Back at the hotel, where we had Wi­Fi, I looked the bookstore up again, hoping we'd have time to find it on another day. But our schedule was delayed, and we probably wouldn't have time to look for it.
On our last full day in Lisbon. Priscilla and I took a day trip to Cascais, a coastal town outside the city. We decided, at the last minute, to visit a historic flea market (跳蚤市场). We walked for about an hour, up many steep hills. When we finally reached the market, completely out of breath, all the sellers were closing up. Not to mention that we were both tired and hungry. Priscilla and I argued over the directions.  I insisted we turn right, which ended up being another bad decision. We climbed up more steep hills, farther and farther away from any area we recognized. We made another right turn onto a random street and Priscilla stopped to check the map. Meanwhile, I looked up at the street sign, Rua da Madalena.  I'd heard that name before. We continued a little farther up the street, and I spotted a few people hanging out in a lane. There was something particularly familiar about the scene. I looked closer. There was a small store practically hidden in the lane. It had books in its windows.
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Oh my goodness!The bookstore!
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Soon,it was time for us to say goodbye.
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写作规范练(二)
第一节
【佳作展台】
Dear Friends,
Welcome to our school.  First of all, on behalf of our school, I will introduce our activity whose theme is “Building a Beautiful China” to you.
The contents of this activity are as follows. During this week, we will encourage people from all walks of life to take an active part in building ecological civilization and join hands to build a beautiful China with blue sky, green land and clear water. The activity features taking low­carbon travel, eliminating plastic bags and disposable chopsticks as well as no littering. What's more, let people be better aware of environmental protection laws, regulations and ways.
I sincerely invite you to attend this activity.  Thank you!
第二节
【文章大意】 作者与姐姐刚刚从葡萄牙旅游归来,与大家分享了一次特别的经历。旅游前作者做了充分的准备,罗列了一个必游地清单,里斯本最小的书店Livraria do Simão就在其中,但是旅途中作者和姐姐就是找不到它。就在准备离开里斯本的最后一天,作者与姐姐迷路了,却意外看到了一条小巷子内有一家小书店。
【写作指导】 Paragraph 1的开头是“天啊!就是那家书店”。再根据第二段首句的提示可知,本段讲的应该是作者无意间看到和姐姐寻觅了很久都没找到的里斯本最小的书店Livraria do Simão时的惊奇和喜悦,然后会谈到进书店看书的情景。
Paragraph 2的开头是“不久,到了说再见的时候”。显然接下来的内容应该是作者描绘自己和姐姐离开书店,以及在回去的路上对这一次奇遇的感想,呼应第一段中的“one experience in particular sticks out”。
【佳作展台】
Paragraph 1:
Oh my goodness! The bookstore! The very one Priscilla and I had so badly wanted to find on our very first day.  We took lots of photos of it in amazement. Our delight must have been noticeable because one of the guys standing outside the store started telling me that it's the smallest bookstore in this city! Not until he led us inside the bookstore did we know that he was the owner of the bookstore.  Inside this small store, we became so addicted to the books that we completely forgot we were tired and hungry.
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Soon, it was time for us to say goodbye. After waving the owner goodbye, Priscilla and I tore ourselves away from the bookstore. On our way back, I couldn't stop smiling. We had just visited the smallest bookstore in Lisbon, met the owner and taken a tour inside! I couldn't get over all the little things that had come together to lead us there. If we hadn't decided to visit the flea market at the last minute, if I hadn't insisted we turn right... That moment in Lisbon was a beautiful coincidence to me.


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